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Kiyoko - redone

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As promised, the new version of Kiyoko hand-drawn with pencil on paper, and then cleaned up on the computer

Cryteria for this picture:
1. A more dynamic pose

2. Full body picture (I neglected the hands and feet in the last one)

3. Make her look like a the college-age young woman she is, not a middle-school girl

Time take:
Lineart: 1-2 hrs
Coloring/shading: 2-3 hrs
Clean-up: 2-3 hrs

Link to the original: [link]

This picture can also be found in my second account ~SilverFoxArtStudio at this link: [link]


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Benjamin-Biddix's avatar
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Well first off, I want to point out that your crescent moons are connected, you should re-work those all together, also your anatomy is very displaced try going to a anatomy stock image website and study for a while before redrawing this type of more complex position because your legs seem to throw me off from the rest of the picture. your hands and the character need lots of work also, Her overall idea of costume and look in general has potential to be very outstanding if you can nail it later on. Your shading is very precise and that is a great start on curving the anatomy but also don't forget to shade the staff while you are at it, at the moment it seems off setting. Another tip I will give you is that if you are not going to put a background on your image make your subject matter larger so that as little white space as possible is showing. As I said before anatomy is the key, practice anatomy and this will improve vastly.
-Hope I was helpful.